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Torn apart, feeling fear
Nothing looks very clear
Feeling wasted and yet used
Left sitting here confused
Trying hard to forget
Living now with regret
Hating what you have inside
Failing every time you tried
Beaten down into a hole
Ripping apart your very soul
Losing all the feeling throughout
No longer any sense of doubt
Nothing looks very clear
Feeling wasted and yet used
Left sitting here confused
Trying hard to forget
Living now with regret
Hating what you have inside
Failing every time you tried
Beaten down into a hole
Ripping apart your very soul
Losing all the feeling throughout
No longer any sense of doubt
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Yes... another depressing poem.
I can only write when I am upset and well... it was the only thing I could do to keep from losing myself.
I can only write when I am upset and well... it was the only thing I could do to keep from losing myself.
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very nice job. I usually don't worry about rhyming but you did it well and maintained a point. I can also relate to it a lot. Especially in the category of romantic issues. 