literature

You've Lost

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They say you should appreciate what you have
What if you didn't
Just took it for granted
What happens when you have to fight it or lose it
Would you give up or battle
Try and be trampled
Honor in loss
No honor here no boss
Only winners and losers
Losing land
None of it planned
Look at how much you've bled
Trying to hold on
You have nothing to grasp
You're making a move
I guess it's the wrong one
This fight isn't over
But guess what now you're done
Done with the fight, too bad
You lost, you couldn't have won
It's all laid out before you
Like a game but it wasn't fun
You're finished you can't go on
This time is it, now you're gone
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Mikaboshi01's avatar
Another great poem.
So much I should say, so much i want to say.
Can't grasp the words though. v_v

If one were to ask did I like it?
I would say I loved it.
and I do as all your other poems, but more should be said.
I love it doesn't really tell you of how great I think it is or how much i would love to write like you.

So much I wish I could say, but all I have is, Loved it.